Tuesday, October 31, 2017

Wonder Kindness Poem

WALT: use new words to suit my acrostic poem.

I was able to use two new words in my acrostic poem. The two new words I used were delightful and empathetic.

Next time I could try to use some more new words in my acrostic poem by looking in a thesaurus and replacing some of the words I used in my kindness poem. I can also use new words in my equipt writing as well.

Thursday, October 19, 2017

Waikanae Trip

WALT : write a clear sequence of events by using appropriate time connective words in my recount.

I was able to write a recount about my trip to Waikanae beach in the school holidays. I used time connective words in my recount and I followed our success criteria. The time conective words that I used in my writing are once, next, when, later and after that. I also put five different pictures in my recount.








Tuesday, October 17, 2017

John Pule Art Reflection

This is my reflection on my John Pule Art that I created for our art exhibition at school.  I am excited to see what people think about my art.